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From my FB page I am going to reproduce something here, FOR the RECORD. I first remind myself about the word I use for a title of a piece on Substack, the word:

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JOURNALISM. It does not even correspond to common sense. Try this one on for size, then:

" In the clip, Trump reiterates several of the arguments he outlined in his previous posts and spewed ... "

That is Salon.com. The language use is common trash journalism writing. It is horrible. Why? You cannot both "reiterate," which sounds pretty formal, and "spew" in the same sentence. Okay? Let's analyze it to be sure we are not missing something. Can I use intelligence without getting censored for it? Or have "times changed"?

Trump does not "reiterate." Not at all. That word is not needed here, because DT says things that seem like lies. "Reiterate" is not it. Trump talked, he spoke, he uses language. He opens his mouth and words fly out. You do not need to tell us he "reiterated." This is just plain dumb.

But let us move on. The next thing is this. When he "spewed," why is that word used? Why did he "spew" that time, and not "reiterate", like he did before?

This is basic common sense. I would keep analyzing but I am worried it is a waste of time. Anyway: We see this kind of language all the time. In journalism this is what those persons do.

A company, like a newspaper or a big web site like Salon.com, supposedly respectable companies, use this sort of language all the time. It really deserves a longer discussion, so maybe I feel bad because I am just putting this up as a short note (comment).

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okay, footnote time people. https://www.salon.com/2023/06/09/too-much-happy-talk-rages-on-truth-social-after-his-team-assured-he-he-wont-be-indicted/

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